Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Justin Bieber Creative Essay By Rajiv

On a dark cold, and stormy night Justin Bieber and little did he know that it was a night of cold disaster and sorrowness .


When 15 year old Justin Bieber had stepped off of the plane into the city of Fire Oak he was astonished that no crazed fans nor news reporters had come up to greet him. He had thought “if this is what I get then I guess I don’t need body guards”, but he was so very wrong. As Justin walked through the town there was a cold stiffness running down his spine but all of the emotions had disappeared when he met Porta Joan, he thought that she was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. That may have been true but Justin did not know that Joan had had been scheming to avenge what Justin had done to her so many years ago. The two had started talking and agreed that they would take a romantic walk through You Better Turn Around or Die woods. So Justin had gone back to the cottage he had rented and he had to get ready for his big date with Porta Joan, so he put on his brand new Dress then he had to put on Britney Spears Perfume, and for a finishing touch he added a bow in his hair. So to kill some time Justin had taken an axe and chopped his clock right in half. Good thing he had a brand new pink Hello Kitty wristwatch. As he awaited his date he stared daydreaming about Telletubbies for some strange reason. He wondered where his date was it had been two whole minutes. Finally after a gruesome nine minutes and thirty seconds he finally saw his dream girl. Strangely she was wearing the same exact dress Justin was. She had looked very puzzled as if she was worried, anxious, and hateful. Even though she had a big celebrity smile on top of that to cover up her feelings like makeup. Justin was so worried he would make a fool of himself. Through the suspense of the long silence there was a sudden noise and everything went cold and black, as if he was trapped in the devils nightmare. As he opened his eyes his date was still there, it felt as if he was in an eternity of darkness. “What happened?” asked Justin.

“You blinked.” Exclaimed Porta. In the back of her mind Porta obviously knew that Justin wasn’t gonna say anything one time because of the fact that he was not t he brightest bulb on the chandelier.

Suddenly Justin exclaimed “I’m a tell you one time that I want to marry you and make you one less lonely girl”. That was her chance to strike… emotionally.

Justin your be gonna one less lonely dude, you won’t be down to earth if you had thousand pound strapped to your feet. NO, I won’t marry you, because when we were kids growing up you took my pencil and that was my favorite pretty pony extra sparkle flashing light limited edition pencil.” Screeched Porta. They only made 13,136,287,483 I checked all of the stores and I couldn’t find one.

“Did you try EBay” said Justin.

“What the duck is EBay” scorched Porta

So Justin had taken her inside to show her EBay and they later discovered that there was 100 of them on EBay Justin bought the, all of them for the love of his life Justin exclaimed “ I’m a tell you three times that I love you”.

“Why so repetitive, God you can be annoying!” Porta remarked, “and to re-answer your question I will marry you.”

Justin was so joyed he took a little tinkle in his pants ant left a present in the back. Justin and Porta had moved into the ghetto in LA so they could have more money for their children to go to college and vacations. So as time passed it became Christmas and all the Santas were on the street. Justin and porta were out to do some holiday shopping and there was Santa determined to get the most money so he was begging everyone in sight, Justin and Porta. He had asked and begged and pleaded for money but Justin was too much of a jerk to give to the less fortunate so the Santa pulled out a concealed pistol and popped Justin right in the mouth. That was the day that Justin Bieber had learned how a bullet tasted and he died in the hospital. Many fans had grieved for the long cold months without Justin but they found a new idol, Lil Wayne.

4 comments:

Brianitza said...

I like it. You have good word choice, but sometimes you used your past tense verbs with your present verbs. Otherwise, it was awesome.
:)

collin said...

You had very good word choice that let you be able to picture the sceens. Although you might try to make sure that your story is easy to fallow and to check for errors next time.

Tanner said...

nice story. i liked how you made the righting really tell us what happens in the story. nice.

Ariana said...

I thought it had really good word choice but as the others said there were some errors.